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Post by Conan Dong on Jan 21, 2009 17:24:07 GMT -5
really good.............................btw when it says "flesh curtain", I know it means eyelids, but it reminds me of a new slang word going around school. The word is beef-curtain and it means vagina. It would still be a good poem even if it was about a crying vagina.
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Post by sascrotch on Jan 21, 2009 17:35:50 GMT -5
wow who came up with that disgusting mental image
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Post by Conan Dong on Jan 21, 2009 18:06:42 GMT -5
i think justin thomas...
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Post by sascrotch on Jan 21, 2009 18:27:39 GMT -5
so an experience of his...?
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Post by Conan Dong on Jan 21, 2009 19:04:56 GMT -5
...apparent banging of lots of chicks
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Post by sascrotch on Jan 22, 2009 9:34:40 GMT -5
with matching STDs?
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Post by Viking Dong on Jan 22, 2009 9:42:01 GMT -5
Yuckeroo.
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Post by sascrotch on Jan 22, 2009 9:43:02 GMT -5
anyway another poem coming soon
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Post by Viking Dong on Jan 22, 2009 9:46:14 GMT -5
Koo kats, mangalo.
BTW, everytime I see this thread title I keep thinking "Sass the Beard". Oh teh luls.
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Post by sascrotch on Jan 22, 2009 9:48:17 GMT -5
hey
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Post by Viking Dong on Jan 22, 2009 9:51:45 GMT -5
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Post by sascrotch on Jan 22, 2009 9:53:00 GMT -5
good
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Post by Viking Dong on Jan 22, 2009 9:54:10 GMT -5
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Post by sascrotch on Jan 22, 2009 15:22:53 GMT -5
Ok back on subject...
Forever Sanctuary
If only for a moment, the world is mine Fear nonexistent, pain forgotten Only joy, numbingly abundant Though sensitive enough to feel your pulse Beating against my skin If only for a day, lost in myself Lost in you, your gaze, your smile Breathing you in Peace If only for a lifetime this was waiting A sanctuary from the storm A ribbon of light around me A love... A love beyond mortality Safe. Passionate. If only forever....
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Post by Viking Dong on Jan 22, 2009 15:42:50 GMT -5
Bravisimo, monsieur.
I thought in particular the "peace" one liner was brilliant.
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