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Poetry?
Sept 30, 2011 14:43:21 GMT -5
Post by egyptiandong on Sept 30, 2011 14:43:21 GMT -5
Hey guys your main man Thorrior here. So I was sitting in calculus this semester completely incapable of paying attention. I had all these other thoughts going through my mind, I was thinking of anything but calculus. So randomly my hand started writing my thoughts down amongst my notes in kind of an odd short hand. About one or two words per thought barely connected. Very raw thoughts exactly where my mind was moving. Anyway I realized after defusing these extra thoughts on paper I was able to pay attention. When a new thought came I just jotted it down and got back to derivatives. I started using this tactic in all my classes. My grades have sky-rocketed and I feel like these raw thoughts are a type of art. I'm not sure if they would be counted as poetry but here are a few. More to come these are all I have with me at the moment. I write a few a day.
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Poetry?
Sept 30, 2011 14:51:02 GMT -5
Post by egyptiandong on Sept 30, 2011 14:51:02 GMT -5
good lies build happiness how immoral don't know bad lie protect us I'm tired* worth it so close so far will ever should ever probably not no good to embarrassed don't say why say don't know don't mention please no enough embarrassment except lie not me scary shit never learn the truth I hope hate me real me want her real her
Not the most pretty bunch of jumbled up words but it is what it is. Feel free to comment on whatever meaning or what have you, you see there. In this situation I'm not really looking for criticism because they are not ironed out poems they are just free thought flow. I really want as little control over them as I can achieve.
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